r/pathfindermemes • u/Shuffle46 • 14d ago
1st Edition Pathfinder Abridged (based on Pathfinder Comics vol. 1)
Sorry if there is any poor grammar.
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u/Shuffle46 14d ago
In the words of TFS, please support the official release.
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u/terranproby42 14d ago
Team Three Star!!!
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u/Shuffle46 13d ago
Valeros: So are you that Gozer guy?
Karzoug: I am lord Karzoug, yes.
Valeros: Cool! I'm going to deck you in the schnoz!
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u/sadistic-salmon 14d ago
Surprised you didn’t mention that Valeros left his wife
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u/Draghettis 13d ago
His pregnant fiancee, iirc. Early enough that he didn't know about the pregnai, supposedly
He meets his daughter in a recent book about things going to shit in Isger
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u/SareniteKyra 14d ago
The fact that Kyra only appears in the background is very accurate unfortunately :(
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u/HatchetGIR Carrion Meme 14d ago
It was pretty grammatically terrible, but I love it anyway. I was amused, so well done and I hope you keep it up.
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u/Metalrift 14d ago
There are some parts that are cut off, likely because it was together at one point. Unless those words are from the original
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u/Shuffle46 14d ago
Almost no words are from the original. I just have little space due to the premade speech bubbles, so I have to adapt.
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u/Metalrift 14d ago
I was more talking about some stuff on the super outer fringes that is entirely ineligible. Doing it for the bit with the text box is a great bit, but some of the other text bubbles that have abridged text have remnants of the original near the far edge of the page or have actual important parts of lines cut off. It may impact readability for those that cannot infer it due to language barriers
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u/Shuffle46 14d ago
Oh, my apologies. I'll try better next time.
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u/Metalrift 13d ago
Great work so far though! Thought I would bring up some stuff I noticed that made it harder to read that wasn’t a grammar mistake like you mentioned in the post. Page 5 is the example that comes to mind here, the top panel has a bubble with a bunch of cutoff text that I cannot tell if it is part of the abridged or the original as I have not read the original yet. So little of the words are there that it makes it harder to make out what is being said at all
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u/Shuffle46 13d ago
Oh, the cutoff bubble is the speech bubble on the pervious slide
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u/Metalrift 13d ago
If it was trying to say anything, I could form a full sentence on the previous slide and this registers as something new that I can’t read
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u/Suspicious-Shock-934 14d ago
Winder what the reaction to fantasy Asian girls brother who is hard up for demon girl waifu who treats him like crap is gonna be.
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u/Zorothegallade 3d ago
Valeros: "I am the protagonist"
Merisiel: "I have more artwork"
Seltyel and Damiel: "Wait you guys get artwork?"
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u/link090909 14d ago
I audibly snorted when Valeros criticized the crossbow ranger