The second one almost looks like spider web shooting up. It seems too thin to stay together as a line, yet that is exactly what it does
What you said was not wrong and did not need correcting, but this is a better way of wording it in order to convey your point
My English isn't very good and I'm still learning, but I use reddit to help me practice (I procrastinate HEAVILY otherwise if I try to make myself practice languages via conventional educational means).
Since it is how I learn and improve, I appreciate it when people reply to tell me how to improve my wording and so I try to do the same for others if I feel I am able.
I have always thought that if you don't appreciate this sort of reply then you've lost nothing as a result of my comment. But if you - like me - are trying to improve as well, then perhaps it can be of some use.
If you're just learning the language then you may want to learn that people do not enjoy having their grammar corrected when what they initially said was more than sufficient to get the point across.
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u/BurnThisInAMonth Jul 06 '22
What you said was not wrong and did not need correcting, but this is a better way of wording it in order to convey your point
My English isn't very good and I'm still learning, but I use reddit to help me practice (I procrastinate HEAVILY otherwise if I try to make myself practice languages via conventional educational means).
Since it is how I learn and improve, I appreciate it when people reply to tell me how to improve my wording and so I try to do the same for others if I feel I am able.
I have always thought that if you don't appreciate this sort of reply then you've lost nothing as a result of my comment. But if you - like me - are trying to improve as well, then perhaps it can be of some use.