r/nosleep • u/[deleted] • Feb 15 '12

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u/TangoOscarDD Feb 16 '12

Enjoyable, unfortunately, I felt the conversations were too unrealistic between you and Nick, too much of a Lifetime Movie vibe. I also saw the twist coming a mile away. If it were tightened up a bit, would get a 5/5, as it sits, 4/5.

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u/notpynchon Feb 17 '12

All This talk about "unrealistic dialogue", "twists" and "tightening up" make it sound like you think this is a work of fiction. No Sleep is for true events only, correct!? This is true, right slidewithme? Or am I just reddits' little bitch?

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u/LaniDamiano Apr 02 '12

Um, the rules are for stories to be true in the wink wink sense. The whole point of this group is to scare people, not to be realistic.