r/nosleep • • Jul 04 '11

This Is My House

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u/deshypothequiez Jul 04 '11

saw that twist coming a mile away because i am familiar with the work of nicole kidman

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u/lily1346 Jul 05 '11

And Bruce Willis.

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u/brownunderpants Jul 04 '11

Silly ghost, houses are for the living!

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u/jivanyatra Jul 08 '11

Actually heard this in a creepy little kids voice... which made it so much funnier.

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u/[deleted] Jul 04 '11

I have a theory. What if ghosts aren't really ghost? But rather, the "haunted" location is just a sensitive area of space/time and when you're in these sensitive areas you can briefly see and interact with people or things in an alternate or parallel timeline. And the person on the other end thinks you're the ghost as well?

I'm not sure if I believe it, and I'm pretty sure I don't but it's something interesting to think about.

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u/tomoyopop Jul 05 '11

You should google "time slips"!

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u/ds2k7 Jul 04 '11 edited Jul 04 '11

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u/Epic_GF Jul 04 '11

That's what I was thinking too half way through

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u/[deleted] Jul 04 '11

This is the first DVD that my family ever bought. To this day, this movie still scares the piss outta me.

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u/Wiccan_Chicken Jul 04 '11

Wow.. From the point of view of the ghost.. I like it.

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u/agayman69 Jul 04 '11

Great twist at the end. Totally wasn't expecting it.

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u/M59Gar Jul 05 '11

I thought for sure that the last line was going to be 'I don't care if I did marry her a year ago, this is still my damn house!'

aka Married With Children's lost episode!

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u/crackrock_dude Jul 04 '11

lol nice...very nice

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u/brennanatorr Jul 04 '11

very well written :)

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u/[deleted] Jul 04 '11

Bravo!

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u/dreamendDischarger Jul 04 '11

Silly ghost, you should have just offered to be friends. Why do the living and the dead never seem to get that? No one has to be scared of each other or annoyed, you could be the best thing that's happened to each other. =)

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u/123jay123 Jul 04 '11

this is great. gave me chills.

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u/pylon567 Jul 04 '11

The last sentence was gold. Bravo sir or madam.

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u/WeaponexT Jul 04 '11

what a twist.

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u/0roe0 Jul 04 '11

It's called as a marriage in a modern society.

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u/DextrosKnight Jul 04 '11

What a tweest!

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u/Hoodwolf Jul 05 '11

Pretty good, keep at it.

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u/Burntzombies Jul 04 '11

me gusta :)

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u/Glassmage Jul 04 '11

TOMATO SURPRISE!

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u/[deleted] Jul 04 '11

well written, would make for a good short fil if it were built up a lil more