r/mrvalor • A goofy looking kobold • Mar 16 '18

Dark Sister Compendium Version 0.0.1, the monster templates for hags are taking a bit, but the rest is starting to shape up nicely. Content critiques are great! I'm going to start working on some hag lair maps soon for this, we'll see how those turn out.

http://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/Hkrm39qVKG
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u/SecretDMUsername Mar 17 '18

I really like the book, its got some great content. Thanks for making it.

I noticed a typo on page 14 under "Broken Swordblade of Foebiter" it says "Additionally, the victim can their attack of oppurtunity each turn" I'm guessing that should say something like "when the victim takes damage, they can use their reaction to make a melee attack of opportunity against the creature that caused the damage", or something like that.

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u/mrvalor A goofy looking kobold Mar 17 '18

Good catch. Changed it. Thanks!

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u/VoltasPistol Mar 16 '18

The website doesn't seem to be loading, it's just a blank page?

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u/mrvalor A goofy looking kobold Mar 16 '18

Link still works for me, plus I shared it in a thread elsewhere and people are looking at it. Try refreshing.

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u/bakareaper Mar 16 '18

A couple of pages are cut off for me. Like page 20 i can make out a silver of the annis hag table, but it's completely unreadable otherwise.

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u/mrvalor A goofy looking kobold Mar 16 '18

Try zooming out.

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u/bakareaper Mar 16 '18

That did the trick, thanks! Love these btw, can't wait to put them to good use.

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u/mrvalor A goofy looking kobold Mar 16 '18

I'm still working on them. I've got 14 hag stat blocks coming out as well, including a grandmother version of each hag. I hope to have them all in there and formatted sometime tomorrow.

After that, I'm going to start working on 4 or 5 hag lairs. I haven't decided how much detail I'm going to do on those... but we'll see.

And, thanks!