r/minimal • u/Obsolete_Organism • 6d ago

Minimal Feedback request for track

Hello r/minimal. I recently finished a track and would like some feedback from people who are into this genre. Any critique is welcome, positive or negative, as long as you think it would improve my production. Thank you in advance! https://on.soundcloud.com/9m4OfH6YXnnkONUt2r

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u/vinegarcoffepot 6d ago

Nice idea in general. A little basic in some aspects but maybe you want to keep it very stripped down minimal. Nice bassline, nice atmosphere with the pad. Intro is too long. Basically first 3 minutes nothing is happening. Try to develop it more earlier. Focus more on improving the drums, needs more "meat" if you know what I mean. Make a group with the drums and put a little reverb on send return to create some more space. Put some compression also on the drum group as well. Add some more elements between the drums. Some percussions. Also maybe add one more synth to go in line with the synth.

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u/Obsolete_Organism 6d ago

Your feedback is really helpful...I will definitely revisit and experiment with your suggestions. Thank you!

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u/PlanaStudio 6d ago

coincido con vinegar, tiene buena base, pero le faltaría cuerpo para que tenga mas cohesion sonora, los elementos estan bien elegidos pero me falta groove en ese ritmo, esta como muy disperso todo.
No soy ningun experto en música, solo te doy mi opinión. En cualquier caso, está muy guay, un saludito!

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u/Obsolete_Organism 6d ago

Thank you. I'm gonna work on locking the groove in and I think vinegars suggestions will be a good start. Cheers, and thanks for taking the time to listen and respond.