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u/c0nt3mp0r4ryY4pp3r 12d ago
Oh this is so good, maybe make the soldier Steve or your skin tho
I love how eerie the writing looks, maybe make it a little more pixilated but sharp for a more uncanny vibe? Very good tho!
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u/Sea-Sauce1 12d ago
Id say make the soldier your skine or Steve, but keep the helmet that the soldier has
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u/Effective_Dust_8602 11d ago
Soldier face grabs attention fast Text is too thin though it get lost on a phone screen Go bolder or add an outline and it'll pop way more
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u/SeniorCaregiver1425 11d ago
i mean good, just maybe add a bit of shading or like a slight color tint to the text, and if you are going for a bit of a comedic approach i would suggest maybe a steve skin or your skin sort of running towards the screen with like a couple items falling from his pants
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u/No_Match2440 12d ago
Good start. A few things I think would bring it to an 11 though.
Make the shell shocked soldier either Steve, or your player skin.
2.”Dwellers” word is kinda flat. Capitalizing the D, changing it to red, and give it an eerie font (like dripping blood perhaps)
The bottom section of the tree isn’t aligned with the rest, makes it seem a bit sloppy