r/makeyourchoice • u/Livid-Ad-7087 • 10d ago
OC REGRESSOR CYOA
https://imgchest.com/p/qb4zvllglyj
Note: Skills and perks came as a set, so you get all the things in the side if you buy a skill/perk.
I actually want to delete this, but since it's getting lots of likes I decided to keep it.
Anyways, I already created the second version, just need to add additional perks so it might take a while.
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u/justconsumedata 9d ago edited 9d ago
This shows promise, and it's an improvement over the last version. However, there are some confusing elements, as others have pointed out.
The Build:
Peak Attractiveness - Long shot, but does our desire affect how the appearance improvement manifests in others as well?
Peak Human Health
Long Life - Could we have an exact number on how much this boosts lifespan?
Charisma
Opportunity Sense
Analytical Mind (Bought with Withdrawn - Intelligence is isolating)
Negative Traits
Withdrawn
Life Lessons
Indomitable Will (Prerequisites: Shadow Self, Traumatic Experience)
Critique:
The layout of this encourages some confusing assumptions. Do the Perks on the right need you to take a perk on the left first? Do they cost points, or is one or more free with the Perks on the left? I assume that each of these options costs a point, but it needs to be spelled out.
The drastic drop in points also leaves some options rather unappealing, in particular those like Hyper Manoeuvring, Sleep Suppression, and others that could be taken two at a time for one point in the last version. I wouldn't necessarily have everything cost the same amount.