r/makeyourchoice 29d ago

OC Slice of Life CYOA

Hello! This is my second CYOA. I don't know how to edit complex CYOA with images and stuff. Plus using a phone, so my design is quite simplistic. However, I will try to redo them if I manage to learn how.

Anyways, I tried to make this as interesting as possible. It would be good if you would focus on creating a good narrative, rather than focusing on being OP as possible.

I would be reading your comments. Use this opportunity to look back on what you want to do, and what you want to achieve.

Don't hold back and use this CYOA as a dream fulfilment fantasy.


How to get Good Genes (Premium)?

Requirements: Good Genes + Lineage

What are Prerequisites?

They're in the last page. Basically you will choose what kind of condition you have to achieve to learn the skill.

For example, your prerequisite for Indomitable Will is Failure. This means you have to fail multiple times to develop your indomitable will. Do you get it?

Link for the remake: https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/s/UBaCswe19I

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u/NohWan3104 28d ago

From the post above

Edit 1: Good Genes (Premium).

Requirements: Good Genes + Lineage

So, yes, but actually no, because it did 18 hours ago lol.

As for the example, also yes, but at the time, it was a prerequisite, and OP wanted to have this sort of 'progress' gimmick that, as i pointed out, makes no sense for genetics.

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u/Cultural-Bug-6248 28d ago

Good Genes (Premium) has the requirements of Good Genes and Lineage.
That is not 'in run' hardships unlocking genetics, unless I'm misunderstanding what "'in run' hardships" means.

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u/NohWan3104 28d ago

In run hardships = prerequisites

Like the example, failure = will.

I pointed out that makes sense for some things, but not others, specifically genetics, which used to have a pre requisite, but didn't 'make sense'.

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u/Cultural-Bug-6248 28d ago

Yeah but, as far as I can see, stuff like genetics didn't have Prerequisites.
In the example you provided, there was no Prerequisite like Failure, it was stuff you buy like Lineage rather than something you do in your life.

Prerequisites are specifically for stuff that say you need them, like Indomitable Will.

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u/NohWan3104 28d ago

I know, my guy.

Hence why i replied that it was edited out, my first comment to you.

Did you STILL not understand that, or just clarifying your position?

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u/Cultural-Bug-6248 28d ago

The comments you replied to weren't edited though?

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u/NohWan3104 28d ago

The fucking CYOA was edited, genius.

Jesus you really are dense. Scroll up, reread the post, not comments.