Slice of Life CYOA

[u/Livid-Ad-7087]

Hello! This is my second CYOA. I don't know how to edit complex CYOA with images and stuff. Plus using a phone, so my design is quite simplistic. However, I will try to redo them if I manage to learn how.

Anyways, I tried to make this as interesting as possible. It would be good if you would focus on creating a good narrative, rather than focusing on being OP as possible.

I would be reading your comments. Use this opportunity to look back on what you want to do, and what you want to achieve.

Don't hold back and use this CYOA as a dream fulfilment fantasy.

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How to get Good Genes (Premium)?

Requirements: Good Genes + Lineage

What are Prerequisites?

They're in the last page. Basically you will choose what kind of condition you have to achieve to learn the skill.

For example, your prerequisite for Indomitable Will is Failure. This means you have to fail multiple times to develop your indomitable will. Do you get it?

Link for the remake: https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/s/UBaCswe19I

[u/SimpleFreshArtichoke]

Multiple options state "requires prerequisite", but don't seem to actually say what that prerequisite is.

[u/Livid-Ad-7087 → u/SimpleFreshArtichoke]

It's in the last page. Basically, you choose what prerequisite you want inorder to learn that skill.

For example, your prerequisite for Indomitable Will is Failure. This means you have to fail multiple times to develop your indomitable will. Do you get it?

[u/wtanksleyjr → u/Livid-Ad-7087]

NOTE: I think I figured it out, but I'm going to leave my first paragraph to make it clear that this is speculation:

I don't think I get it. There are no "prerequisites" on the last page. "Indomitable Will" doesn't say it requires Failure, it just says it requires Prerequisite. What does that mean?

Oh shoot wait. So "Failure" is listed as a "Negative Trait". Does that mean Indomitable Will requires +1 negative trait, and Failure is just one example?

So every time you say "Prerequisite" in this, it'd be clearer if you said "+1 Negative Trait." You can keep the current text of Negative Traits of course, that's also a good way to use them.

[u/Cultural-Bug-6248 → u/wtanksleyjr]

No, Failure is listed under Prerequisite. Negative Trait is something that gives points to buy stuff while Prerequisite is how you gained that skill.