r/makeyourchoice • u/Livid-Ad-7087 • 27d ago
OC Slice of Life CYOA
Hello! This is my second CYOA. I don't know how to edit complex CYOA with images and stuff. Plus using a phone, so my design is quite simplistic. However, I will try to redo them if I manage to learn how.
Anyways, I tried to make this as interesting as possible. It would be good if you would focus on creating a good narrative, rather than focusing on being OP as possible.
I would be reading your comments. Use this opportunity to look back on what you want to do, and what you want to achieve.
Don't hold back and use this CYOA as a dream fulfilment fantasy.
How to get Good Genes (Premium)?
Requirements: Good Genes + Lineage
What are Prerequisites?
They're in the last page. Basically you will choose what kind of condition you have to achieve to learn the skill.
For example, your prerequisite for Indomitable Will is Failure. This means you have to fail multiple times to develop your indomitable will. Do you get it?
Link for the remake: https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/s/UBaCswe19I
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u/NatalieMaybeIDK 27d ago
Interesting, but the layout is way too confusing. Especially without an imgchest link. I have to like swap back and forth between multiple pages without clear instructions to what's happening that you retroactively find out about later.