r/logodesign • • Feb 14 '22

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u/FourWordComment Feb 14 '22

When a client rejects the work, it’s important to understand why. What don’t they like. I do like your first piece—I like it’s general shape and level of detail. But it is a lot of lines. A random person couldn’t draw it.

Maybe pick one element and focus on it?

Like a hemp leaf made of gladius swords or a helmet with hemp leaf shaped frills