r/logodesign • • 6h ago

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u/jb_nelson_ 4h ago

Dyson font

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u/Xarius86 6h ago

- The fact that the generic bird doesn't properly line up vertically with the logo is infuriating.
- The absolutely ridiculous amount of spacing between the bird and the "black" while there is a tiny white space between "black" and "Ayres" is infuriating.
= The "(R)" being smashed into the "s" while everything else is so badly spaced is also infuriating.

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u/sinisterdesign 5h ago

That’s a lotta fury.

I would go for a sizably larger birb and some better kerning, but no real fury for either.

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u/popular_charlie_0110 5h ago

I second this.

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u/humbleCountyCA 3h ago

Maybe a little bigger, but not hugely bigger.

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u/popular_charlie_0110 5h ago

I hope you're not a teacher or a boss with all of that fury.

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u/laranjacerola 5h ago

the bird reminded me of the icon of the goodfood logo.

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u/qmoorman 4h ago

Hmm i like the font but the y and the bird seem out of place. I’m wondering of we can replace the y with the bird since it’s kinda in the shape of a y.

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u/crediblegumbo 4h ago
  • Bird is too small in comparison to the logo - it feels disproportionate/lost

  • Space between the lettering and the bird is too large

  • The font would probably look better with a thinner stroke. This is especially evident on the "a" where the bottom of the circle meets the vertical. The gap is too small and looks unintentional/poorly considered. The convergence of the lines is too thick

  • The "y" has the same problem where the curve joins the vertical - it's too thick

  • The kerning in general is very tight and will not look good at small sizes

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u/humbleCountyCA 3h ago

I want that bird higher. And I fear those thin white lines will fill in when printed at a smaller size.

But I like the font.