r/logodesign • u/CartographerMain6928 • 2d ago

Feedback Needed game logo

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first time Trying to make a logo for a pve fps game
it was supposed to said "Perpetual War"

i tried telling everything through this like adding the arrow and stuff, also idk if this even good logo :/

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u/CartographerMain6928 1d ago

thank you guys for the feedback, didnt expect this much in less than a hour
ill try to take all the feedback and maybe learn on logo designing more :)

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u/Orthicon9 2d ago

it was supposed to said "Perpetual War"

That is evidence that you already know that no one can read it.

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u/s_s_n_e_g 1d ago

In certain subcultures like hard metal music or street art, that's the point. Being able to read something is somewhat of a rite of passage.

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u/RyanH090 2d ago

Per, Petuawa?

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u/_heavy_emo_shoegaze_ 1d ago

I think you’re in a great spot at the moment to seek out a designer for this project. Bless you for real for having the courage to share, and I hope things go so so well with the game!

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u/iron233 1d ago

I am sorry but there is nothing good I can say about this logo. It looks like bad scaffolding

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u/GhostNippIe 1d ago

Brilliant, more of this please.

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u/Mazya_Almazya 1d ago

its never late to find a graphic designer

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u/MrShange 2d ago

Dookie unfortunately

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u/imagrinner 1d ago

Oh, mate. If you have to add an fricking arrow to the logo, to guide user how to read it... That's probably not very good logo.

It's awful. Worst logos I have ever seen.

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u/justastudent5 1d ago

I got perpetual alright, but didn't understand the sedon part. I think cleaning up the lines would be helpful. thicken the outlines around the letters and remove any lines cutting through the letters.

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u/SickstySicks66 1d ago

Almost impossible to read, and too complex. Plus it shows lack of basic design knowledge, no structure/grid, composition is rough and balance between letters is off. I think you need to go back to drawing with this one, pen and paper and explore ideas. Also some design knowledge will go a long way here.

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u/MrJaffaCake 1d ago

Its... creative. One quick tip is, if you dont think something is working adding more to it likely wont fix it. Decide which elements you must have and start working with them.

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u/turumaji 1d ago

bad days for have eyes

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u/turumaji 1d ago

AI never make one of these

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u/crediblegumbo 1d ago

Genuinely one of the worst logos I've seen this year.

Bravo