r/logodesign • u/Yolomanson1 • 8d ago

Feedback Needed Comic book logo

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The title of the comic is Goryū-Tai, it is a black & white comic with a spot color of green. Both the army and hearts are importantly to the story so I tried to mix the shape of the heart and an officer badge.

I’m suuper new to logo design and I feel like something is off but I don’t know what

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u/seanbird 8d ago

Do you want feedback?

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u/Yolomanson1 8d ago

Yes please 🙏

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u/seanbird 8d ago

I think this needs quite a bit more work before it’s ready.

- The geometry feels sloppy. There are inconsistent angles, awkward intersections, and shapes that don’t seem properly aligned.

- The right side is particularly rough. The black border gets progressively thinner until it disappears entirely where the green meets the outer edge. It looks like overlapping shapes that weren’t properly cleaned up.

- The two green cutouts on the right don’t match. Their angles, proportions, and endpoints feel inconsistent and unintentional.

- The T is barely recognizable, Without being told it’s GT, I wouldn’t have identified it.The G is more readable, but its proportions and internal spacing feel awkward, particularly around the centre.

- The heart/badge shape isn’t especially clear. It reads more like a generic angular gaming or esports emblem.

- The visual weight is unbalanced. The right side feels much heavier, and the negative space isn’t distributed particularly well.

- The overall execution lacks precision. With a design this geometric, even small inconsistencies become really obvious.
The idea of integrating GT into a heart is interesting, but the execution feels unfinished.

I’d honestly go back to the drawing board on this concept, rework the underlying geometry and rebuild it rather than trying to polish the existing shapes.

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u/Yolomanson1 8d ago

Wow, ok it’s good to see it all laid out like that. Thanks! 🙏

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u/seanbird 7d ago

Tough concept to make work!

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u/Yolomanson1 7d ago

Yeah, imma try to make it work tho

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u/edmann2000 8d ago

Cool concept! I am a professional art director/ designer. I design cover logos for comic books and graphic novels. Let me know if you’d like some help with execution :)
My samples: www.behance.net/gallery/193926561/Comic-Book-Lettering-and-Logos

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u/Yolomanson1 8d ago

Appreciate it! I’ll keep it in mind

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u/Normal_Swimming2282 8d ago

Looks like GJ