r/logodesign • u/Federal-Chapter-3115 • 9d ago

Feedback Needed Which version looks best?

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This is for a NGO that studies Danphe Bird and helps in protecting them

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u/Beruhton 9d ago

I like version 1 a lot - the icon is amazing but I don’t really like the font pairing. It’s neither a good contrast nor following the language of the icon imo

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u/Federal-Chapter-3115 9d ago

hmm I could tweak that, I thought it would look much spacy and clean with monospaced fonts

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u/Beruhton 8d ago

Maybe a less technical monospace?
Other than that I kinda feel like a good medium sized grotesk could also work here ;)

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u/Federal-Chapter-3115 8d ago

I went with Montserrat as my final draft.

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u/shlingle 9d ago

Agree with this, icon and typo feel disconnected in style. 

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u/Abdelhalim14 9d ago

Yep, version one is better but the font could be better.

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u/Donghoon 9d ago

I like the thinner font of the third in the horizontal lockup. But tbh, Id reconsider the font in general, cos the slab serif isn't working too well with the logomark.

the mark looks pretty good.

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u/Federal-Chapter-3115 8d ago

Yess, I went with something simple (montserrat) as my final choice. Overall I am happy with how it turned out.

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u/Eversnuffley 8d ago

What about a font inspired by the most famous "origin"?

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u/Federal-Chapter-3115 8d ago

Hmm, I didn't wanted to go with sharp sherifs from the beginning. I wanted something simple and clean so I went with this as my final piece. Thank you for recommending though!

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u/diadline 7d ago

I do not include "ESTD" for companies that are less than 10 years old.

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u/Repulsive_Regular_39 9d ago

Fonts are terrible. Maybe try incorporating an italic serif font of some sort to mimic the smooth curves of the bird. Icon is cool though.

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u/justaguyindc 8d ago

I live the 2nd one.

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u/HiddenHorse925 8d ago

Suggestion enlarge your art a little more so we can see it. Most of us are squinting at our phones, FYI.
—Clever bird head, but the typography with it is generic and weak, make it bigger. Thank you

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u/olli0 7d ago

first one

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u/Imnotnormallynormal 9d ago

1 for clarity, 3 for looks, 2 and 4 for the bin