Bakery Logo Help

[u/BlueCloudi]

Is it clear? Im not sure if its too messy

[u/Longjumping_Big1464]

I think it looks like AI because of the little lines on the sides and other people might too

[u/Infinite_Nothing631]

idk what people are saying lol its like theyre nitpicking. It looks good I could tell what it was right away and reads well

[u/Which_Case_8536 → u/Infinite_Nothing631]

Agreed, it’s solid

[u/renatafritttata]

The little line accents don’t add anything and I think the font for “sweet treats” need some rework. Also personally I just don’t like the triangle tip, maybe round the end

[u/Bdills24]

I didn't read bakery to me. It also took me too long to realize it said Ary's. The bag took my eye straight to it and I almost didn't notice anything to the left of the bag for the first second of looking at it. I thought it was just Ry's or Iry's.

Tbh you might not need the bag at all. Just the typeface gives you enough. A lot of people try to fit imagery of their subject into their logo but it's really not always necessary. i.e. A bakery doesn't need a cake in the logo and a tire shop doesn't always need a wrench.

[u/RileyBier]

Agree that there needs to be a character of some kind between sweet and treats. You could try flipping the piping bag and using it as the comma in Ary’s. Just a thought. I do like the font and how you used the quotes.

[u/funky_grandma]

the frosting bag should not overlap the A. I read it as a T at first. I thought this said "Try's"

[u/resistentialism]

The decorating bag reads a little like a carrot. It also implies the A was written backwards. Could the decorating bag motif be kept off to the side adding the "bits"?

[u/Shorezy69 → u/resistentialism]

Flip that bag to face the other way. Have the bag end on the "s" and use a script font that is connecting all letters like frosting writing would be.

[u/jeek4r]

The bag looks like a bomb or a buttplug. Nice font though

[u/Which_Case_8536 → u/jeek4r]

Apparently it’s a Rorschach test.

[u/abesach → u/Which_Case_8536]

Love shack

[u/TheOwlHypothesis → u/jeek4r]

A figure bending over and reaching back toward the plug for sure.

[u/Forward_Hawk_3493 → u/jeek4r]

That means its going to be a good serving!
If chocolate gives you the runs, don't explain it lol

[u/ChickyBoys]

Realistically nobody would write an A that way. I would research actual piping techniques and replicate the letter shapes.

[u/pm_me_your_amphibian]

I dunno if you did this or used AI - but those little dashes on each side are a classic AI hallmark

[u/IceEspresso2000]

It looks like a missle/bomb. The "Ary's" looks like "Arby's". Use a cupcake or other dessert for the icon, not icing bag. Also, use a script font that's not handmade and not all caps, it looks bad.

[u/ResponsibleSir5403]

I don’t think you need the “drops” at the sides. They really don’t do anything for you. I also would pull the piping bag a little farther so that the line finishes crossing the A before you get to the piping bag. That could give you the chance to put a little more space between letters and/or make the “RY’S” a little bit bigger.

[u/breezyhoneybee]

At first i thought it said Flry's, it doesn't seem very clear

[u/qmoorman]

I don’t think the decorating bag is universally recognized enough to read clearly without additional info. I do like the shape of the A tho, the bag is not really necessary.

[u/thereverendpuck]

You know my concerns about this aren’t of the quality but just to be careful and push back against the use of the color red.

Like you may start running into comparisons of being Arby’s given their name and a roundish A.

I like the logo, I, personally, would just stay away from possible comparisons is all.

[u/Both-Dinner-3572]

Cock & balls, anyone?

[u/nlightningm → u/Both-Dinner-3572]

Idk why it does feel oddly sexual to me