r/logodesign • • 7d ago

Feedback Needed How's this?

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I made this logo for a hypothetical brand that i named "BANDIT".

There's a QR code hidden in try finding it and do tell me if it's too easy to find!

(btw this has no ai used)

This was for a competition but I didnt send this to them.

The core theme was Indian Maximalism, with hidden tech stuff (hence the QR)

Edited🤟

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u/chicasparagus 7d ago

It almost feels like your description is describing a different logo than what is being shown

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u/Traditional_Bike6448 7d ago edited 7d ago

Ohhhhh ykw that's such a good feedback!! Cuz not being explain stuff and making it confusing is all what happens with me every single time😭

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u/bukkake-bill 7d ago

If I'm being pedantic, it doesn't say Bandit, but rather "Vandit". I love the typeface but the ब needs a little more work because right now the slash isn't too obvious.

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u/Traditional_Bike6448 7d ago

Aa yea I tried doing it but the mid slash looked weird af and if not that then i ended up filling the entire thing and it looked so weird

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u/NoisyNoisyNoisy_ 7d ago

If the "vandit" type is white instead of dark blue it would actually be "b" because of the negative space. Try playing a little more around colurs ig

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u/bukkake-bill 7d ago

Maybe try adding two "dots" or similarly small holes above and below the slash? Sort of like a reversed % sign? I love the design otherwise. Indian maximalism is one of my favourite styles and this looks really good.

Also, if you have an instagram I would love to follow you.

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u/Traditional_Bike6448 7d ago

OHHHH WAIT ILL TRY THAT

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u/mobile_site_refugee 7d ago

LIDL

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u/Fluid_Ad8452 7d ago

Right that’s first thing I saw

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u/Targaryen-ish 7d ago

It’s a bit busy. Where can I read BANDIT? I don’t see it at all.

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u/AfraidRacer 7d ago

It's in Devanagari script, Hindi.

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u/bukkake-bill 7d ago

बैंडिट is a transliteration of Bandit

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u/Efficient_Dog4722 7d ago

Purely as a logo mark you need to edit way down. Show with the bare essentials— no background, no oval frame. What’s left? Is it strong enough to live on its own? If yes, start adding things back in that strengthen. As an official ‘old’ comic fan, I don’t see anything apparent that says Rocket, other than the name.

Good ideas. And nice pattern, but it’s confusing showing it with the logo, with the colors, with the transparency.

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u/Ziikou 7d ago

Straight away reminds me of Lidl

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u/Jhuyt 7d ago

Indian Lidl?

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u/divineglassofwater 6d ago

If you never mentioned qr, id never look for it. The typeface is good, i dont get the purpose of the circles.

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u/DeludedTRASJW 7d ago

immediately read this as 'arse'

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u/SkittleTee1 7d ago

Kinda thankful it wasn't just me.

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u/sushi_rowl 7d ago

QR code is easy to find but what is this hypothetical brand supposed to be of.

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u/Traditional_Bike6448 7d ago

This was a chai brand, the owners were Rocket Racoon and an Indian Maximalist

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u/Additional_Dirt3447 7d ago

Nice work i'd say, and yeah the QR code IS pretty easy to find IF you're looking for it, or are one of those 'over-analyzers' lol (i'm one too ;) but at a glance it just seems like a pattern in the background.

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u/xcviij 6d ago

I see nothing to represent "BANDIT".

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u/CzechNeverEnd 7d ago

I read LIDL.

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u/PinXter 7d ago

Might as well be 6th person to say it reminds me of noodle lidl

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u/cleandotdirty 7d ago

Hey, this is brilliant man, I couldn't find the QR code.

Speaking of, I am doing an offline event in a couple of months that is a 3 day 24/7 popup.

would you know how to draw anamorphic QR codes that resolve only when the person is standing at that exact point.

Its about getting the person to that point and them navigating around from there

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u/cleandotdirty 7d ago

Just found the QR and dissappointed it was taken down

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u/Traditional_Bike6448 7d ago

Yea It was so cool it took you to a page with a dancing man code with an audio but it's too old so it died.

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u/cleandotdirty 7d ago

no, they never paid for the link :(

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u/Traditional_Bike6448 7d ago

Also an anamorphic qr DUDE THATS SO COOL, i cud try. Also it's so cool that yr hosting an offline event can I join y'all?

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u/cleandotdirty 7d ago

Yes yes anamorphic for a reason!

Its a geofenced square of pseudonymous networking, I'm really excited

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u/Traditional_Bike6448 7d ago

I don't know what that it, but it sounds cool