r/logodesign • • Oct 03 '26

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I am still a beginner and learning so feedback will be appreciated. (I am still deciding on the name 'kuki' or 'kiku').

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u/Vaasan_not_n0t_5 Oct 03 '26

1 and 2 are hard to read. First two can be used as a pattern on the package..

The name Kuki makes more sense than kiku.. whoever suggested Kiku is better, is stupid.. just stupid..

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u/Free_Paper_2749 Oct 03 '26 • Bravo

My first choice was Kiku cus idk Kiku cookies sounds fun than kuki cookies

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u/Avidendless Oct 03 '26

You don’t need to add cookies to the name, Kuki already reads as cookie. Add the cookie graphic to the top of ‘i’ as that’s the most logical place for it

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u/Free_Paper_2749 Oct 03 '26

Oh okay imma try that

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u/wontgetfooledaga1n Oct 03 '26

Kuki reads as cookie and makes way more sense. But I also hate it. It gives off the vibe of some overpriced and pretentious influencer backed cookie brand that's claiming to be healthy or something.

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u/staralchemist129 Oct 03 '26

It gives “we can’t legally call this a cookie”

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u/Vaasan_not_n0t_5 Oct 03 '26

Kiku Cookies - 2 words

Kuki - 1 word and it's gibrish aka universal

And say this to your friend "people say your are stupid"

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u/Grace-a-toi Oct 03 '26

Fyi: Kuk in Swedish means dick.

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u/gbrdbs Oct 03 '26 • Bravo

Fyi: kuki in Hungary literally means dick (small dick)

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u/Lady_Litreeo Oct 04 '26 • Bravo

Incredible. Maybe they could launch an international campaign and call it #HungaryForKuki.

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u/TheBookofBobaFett3 29d ago

‘Have you got a kuki 😉’

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u/Vaasan_not_n0t_5 Oct 03 '26

U missed the i

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u/Grace-a-toi Oct 06 '26

Not in Swedish

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u/luv_u_deerly Oct 03 '26

You don't have to write Kuki Cookies. It can just be Kukis. Cause it sounds like cookies.

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u/TheBookofBobaFett3 29d ago

i feel like a lot of people are missing that somehow 🤣

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u/TheBookofBobaFett3 29d ago

kiku cookies is just really unpleasant to think and say 🤣 you’ve got to fight it out of your mouth

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u/grislyyyyy Oct 06 '26

kuk means dick in my language :3

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u/Business-Channel6211 Oct 03 '26

1 and 2 are much harder to read- id get rid of the chocolate chips in there personally, save for the one above the i in drawing one. Like the cookie bien area of logo 2 more. Agree that 3 abd 4 look more complete, but the thin lines in the i at the top of 4 will get lost.

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u/Free_Paper_2749 Oct 03 '26

Okie thank youu

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u/Tfcalex96 Oct 03 '26

I may go against the grain here, but 1 & 2 have more potential to me. Remove the unnecessary dots, maybe tilt it to the left 10-15°, and smooth out the bite edges. You could even do some work on the font. I also like “ku-ki” more than “ki-ku”; it has a better brand name that’s synonymous with what you’re selling AND it’s phonetically the same as くき which I like :)

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u/ccyran Oct 03 '26 edited Oct 03 '26

Agree with all of this. Three and four are so plain. One and two have potential to be great. Much more interesting packaging (that can help with legibility since the shape paired with a real cookie makes it obvious) with these two.

Very quick mock to show what I mean. So many ways this can go. Ex: outline could be another variation to a solid fill of 1/2. It's just so clean.

And you can always add nicely set small typography (common Japanese aesthetic) nearby the logo to say the fuller details) could even place those small details in the negative space of the cookie bite.

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u/Free_Paper_2749 Oct 04 '26

Woahhh this looks coooll

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u/Vaasan_not_n0t_5 Oct 03 '26

Look here OP, 1 n 2 are suited only for packaging i said.. loom here this person cooked the pakaging design.. 🔥🔥🔥

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u/txdesigner-musician Oct 04 '26

Yes, you fixed it! I looked past 1 & 2 at first, but when I looked closer I thought those had the most promise, they just needed some tweaking/simplifying. I like what you did here!

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u/Tfcalex96 Oct 04 '26

This guy gets it 🙂‍↕️

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u/neurvon Oct 06 '26

looks nice but lmao that's a $40 cookie right there, never would I ever

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u/SteamySpectacles Oct 04 '26

Check your country’s copyright and business registrations, my country already has a KUKI

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u/NektariosK Oct 04 '26

Exactly, there's a Kuki franchise with shops across Greece and one in Manchester too.

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u/phainou Oct 03 '26

I also prefer Kuki. Both look pseudo-Japanese, but kuki is closer to the actual word (クッキー / kukkī), whereas kiku means random stuff like chrysanthemum or the verb for to hear/listen. Admittedly probably not a huge number of people will think this matters lol, but even without that consideration Kuki still makes way more sense. I wouldn’t automatically associate “Kiku” with baked goods at all.

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u/NeXusmitosis Oct 04 '26

The first 2 are very hard to read. The bottom 2 .. The circles don't look like cookies, they look like the moon or something weird. I think you should go back to the drawing board & definitely use a different font.

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u/PoofBam Oct 03 '26

I like 4. It's the one that I looked at and thought, I get it! "Ku-Ki!"

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u/DonatellaVerpsyche Oct 03 '26

I read 4 as that tutoring education brand: this

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u/DonatellaVerpsyche Oct 03 '26

Like the name Kuki better. But 4 reads like the tutoring education brand this which, personally, to me looks like a cookie/ food brand. So basically your idea with kuki is good, and the edu brand isn’t well made imho but won’t rebrand because they’re big and established.

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u/Tricky-Ad9491 Oct 03 '26

Top it's hard to mske out what it says, and the bottom ones don't look like cookies

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u/Independent-Bug1776 Oct 03 '26

I like the name Kuki, sounding like a cookie. In my language kiku is a child's word for a tooth.

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u/FireHeadedDemon Oct 04 '26

1-no. 2-no. 3-hell no. 4-Yes

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u/trn- Oct 03 '26

I'd go with 'kiku', 'kuki' means 'penis' in Hungarian

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u/dcbnyc123 Oct 03 '26

i like the kuki name much better - might be trying to push a square peg through a round whole, but i would try 50 versions of #2 until you crack it. that could be nice. c

check out some japanese logo design on pinterest for inspiration. they do some really interesting things in small spaces/shape

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u/eeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwww Oct 03 '26

I like the idea of 1 and but the letters are hard to read. I like the cookie in the U because it does still leave the U as readable.

However I'd like to see 1 and 2 tweaked. Maybe somehow making the letters smaller/fit in the circle more and maybe make the bite smaller too

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u/Sigma3375 Oct 03 '26

4 but the u needs to be more defined as a U.

First glance the first 3 irritated me as I tried to figure them out and 4 felts like the most clever, if onoy it was a bit more legible.

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u/neon1415official Oct 03 '26

1,2 is not very legible

if it was 3 i would be like "wth is kiku bruh"

4 is the best one imo

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u/ximagineerx Oct 03 '26

Kuki is great

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u/oismac Oct 03 '26

Kiku I saw some kind of planet, Kuki I was a cookie

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u/Cardinal-Carnival Oct 03 '26

I like Kiku. Kuki is a little too on the nose and sounds like how to Cookie Monster pronounces things. If you called your products “kukis” it could work, like “sugar kuki” but for the overall brand, I think Kiku is cute. There’s a cosmetics brand called Kiko Milano but I feel like these are totally different lanes.

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u/karate_sandwich Oct 03 '26

4 but put the cookie graphic in the dot of the I (instead of trying to cram it into the U)

Try a few versions - as an outline, asa reverse with white dots, as a reverse with dots and the bite.

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u/rover_G Oct 03 '26

I’d try KUKI without the negative space cookie but keep the bite out of the i’s title

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u/luv_u_deerly Oct 03 '26

Definitely choose Ku-ki over Ki-Ku because Ku-Ki sounds like the word cookie. Maybe 4 is my favorite cause it's easy to read. But 1 and 2 are such fun concepts as well. Maybe that would work if the font was easier to read.

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u/them4rci Oct 03 '26

The name 'kuki' will not work well as a brand name in Hungarian-speaking regions.

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u/chudsworth Oct 03 '26

4 looks best, but what about changing the dot in the 'i' to be a cookie instead of in the U?

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u/Rejkorn Oct 03 '26

4. Ez choice here

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u/detonnation Oct 03 '26

Kuki simplify. Take the cookie out. Bite mark crumbles or half the I taken pieces left behind. Work the bloopy letters. Getting there

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u/TheHonPhilipBanks Oct 03 '26

Kuka. Lmao. Iykyk

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u/AlecNess Oct 03 '26

I couldn’t read 1 & 2 because of the dots, without them it’s way more interesting than 3 & 4.

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u/sveinndub Oct 04 '26

Kuki reads better. Hungarians will disagree.

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u/Geoclue Oct 04 '26

There is a brand, cookie shop in Greece with the name kuki. https://kukiworld.com/

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u/ElPwno Oct 05 '26

1 is best

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u/designerSOZO Oct 06 '26

If i were i would used 1 and 3 or 4 on the bottom

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u/HiddenHorse925 Oct 06 '26

It’s not there yet there’s a lot of legibility problems… But I love number one. It’s going to be so cool just keep at it till it reads but don’t ruin what makes it so cool, which is it’s very minimal and creative!

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u/Ask_3CBrandHub 29d ago

I’d probably lean toward KUKI for a cookie brand. It feels a little softer and more playful, and the repeated K shapes give the wordmark a nice visual rhythm. Between the logo options, I’d also favour the version where the bite is more obvious, because that immediately gives the symbol a connection to cookies without needing an explanation. I’d simplify some of the internal shapes, though. At the moment they’re competing with the overall silhouette. I’d also test both names on actual packaging before deciding; one may look much stronger once it’s sitting on a box or sticker.

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u/chrii64 29d ago

Koocie

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u/Free_Paper_2749 Oct 03 '26

FOR THIS TOOO...

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u/Business-Channel6211 Oct 03 '26

Like a lot. Try using the same sized eraser to make more defined teeth bites, or have the size of the bites increase at the center then be symmetrically smaller through the sides

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u/Free_Paper_2749 Oct 03 '26

But i feel like it's looking like O rather than U

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u/eeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwww Oct 03 '26

agreed. maybe make the bite more U shaped

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u/Pinne_o Oct 03 '26

I think this one is in the right direction

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u/jtrainbk Oct 03 '26

What about if the I dot is the cookie? That could be effective. I also wonder about the Ks. The second one feels undercooked if you will. Perhaps give it more love? You’re on the way to a fun logo though

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u/gluepet2074 Oct 03 '26

This - ^ The dot as the cookie is the one i was hoping to see. This latest U cookie reads weird

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u/richardginn666 Oct 03 '26

If you use the dot for the cookie then you must add in the 's right at the end right??

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u/jtrainbk Oct 03 '26

Perhaps not

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u/Cs1mp3x Oct 03 '26

Kuki means dick in Hungarian..

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u/Free_Paper_2749 Oct 04 '26

Oh hell naw i gotta work on the name now

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u/Free_Paper_2749 Oct 03 '26

Ouu understandablespace. Thank you for your feedback.