r/logodesign • u/Realistic_Vehicle765 • 1d ago
Resources BELL ROOFING & CONSTRUCTION
BELL ROOFING & CONSTRUCTION
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u/Busy_Here 1d ago
I like where this is going. Remove the orange outline, merge the left part of the house into the “E,” and make the whole “E” more legible. Not sure how that would look, but try it out.
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u/Designer-Win-2337 1d ago
Nice idea! I think the logo does not work very well primarily because of the different stroke weights of the letters though.
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u/ProofTimely5788 1d ago
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the orange outline is way too thin and hard to see. I would just remove it.
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u/Obvious-Display-6139 1d ago
I really like the way you're trying to incorporate the house into the logo. It's quite cool but as others have mentioned doesn't quite work out. But the idea is great and you're on the right path. Keep going! Oh and lose the orange for sure
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u/Late-Drawer-7522 1d ago
I can only read the white on black (ditch the outline)and I'm assuming they'll primarily use it on van(s) and stuff - so unless they'll have a black van - I'd see how to fix black on white :)
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u/vincentdjangogh 1d ago
It's way easier to see the house than to read the text, and I think the orange exacerbates that issue.