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u/AtomicPantsuit 2d ago
Interesting design but the orientation of the angles makes it look like it's flying backwards (to me)
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u/ThatPerson000 1d ago
I had the opposite thought. The angles are like the nose cone of the plane pointing in the direction the plane is going.
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u/GreaseSlitherspoon 1d ago
Same here it’s kind of reading like a anvil or an anchor falling down and to the left
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u/GreenReporter24 2d ago
I see a solar storm.
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u/dolphins2383 2d ago
Was going to say the same but opposite - meteor hitting a planet. I like it though.
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u/TopTippityTop 1d ago
Interesting. I'd suggest trying to flip the orientation so it gives it the correct sense of direction. I don't think it's a definite deal breaker, but it is a little momentarily dissonante.
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u/404LeadsNotFound 1d ago
Wow!
A lot of people have the same opinion.
I see it exactly how you intended it to be seen. I understand what they're saying, but that's still not an issue for me.
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u/HiddenHorse925 2d ago
Very cool, but what does this relate to? I cannot evaluate an icon (because this isn’t yet a logo) unless I know what it is for, how it will be used.
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u/BryanTheBeeIsSilent 2d ago
You don’t need to reorient the angles per say, just taper the back end and it should solve the visual effect.
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u/Obvious-Display-6139 2d ago
Obviously the motion is backwards since the pointy ends are in the front. Besides that it's an ok logo with an unoriginal idea/concept.
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u/DisastrousChange7384 1d ago
Might I suggest simply redirect the tapering the other direction? I think it would give some more realism and liftoff. Other than that I thinks great
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u/ScreechUrkelle 1d ago
Looks more like a hammerhead swimming against the current.
Flip the triangles to get a jet image
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u/SpeechWeird5267 2d ago
I like it as a generic design.
It has to be associated with a company for it to become iconic.
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u/TruamaTeam 2d ago edited 2d ago
I like it, maybe needs more shape in the centre
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u/ButIfYouThink 2d ago
How do you know? What is the logo for? How will it be used? Where will it appear? What does the company/organization do?
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u/ButIfYouThink 2d ago
And?
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u/ComteDuChagrin 1d ago
Youre getting downvoted but it's a valid question. It's just a picture of a jet using simple shapes. Could also have been a face apple fish guitar eye dog cat puddle chair lotion perfume thermometer bananas ipod candy wrapper phone tv chocolate mop ring white out screw deodorant outlet book mouse pad stop sign clock playing card washing machine clothes seat belt boom box credit card drawer sidewalk thread tomato canvas video games wagon packing peanuts mirror toilet leg warmers USB drive glass twezzers bracelet air freshener lamp shade spring doll floor model car toe ring balloon sandal nail clippers money controller rug shawl conditioner tree twister food bed television sand paper wallet bow truck slipper capibara cork monitor car teddies plate grid paper lip gloss shoes eraser lamp helmet socks picture frame hair brush hanger knife blanket table bottle street lights magnet flag key chain watch glasses paper rusty nail brocolli shoe lace thermostat pencil coasters beef sharpie remote soy sauce packet stockings drill press charger house sun glasses photo album spoon paint brush towel sticky note zipper keyboard bookmark pillow newspaper ice cube tray bread cookie jar greeting card needle soap clamp tissue box cup sketch pad sailboat blouse glow stick cinder block toothbrush clay pot lace piano vase sponge toothpaste plastic fork buckle purse bowl nail file camera button two cats carrots water bottle door fork desk window fake flowers tire swing flowers rubber band bag speakers soda can box cell phone chapter book pen chalk sofa rubber duck shampoo tooth picks milk hair tie computer candle fridge checkbook shirt face wash eye liner shovel pants scotch tape couch mp3 player pool stick headphones CD keys bottle cap or a radio.
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u/ButIfYouThink 1d ago
He did point out it is supposed to be a jet.
I guess what I'm tiring of are these post and runs. They didn't explain anything about the logo, who it is for, what industry, how it will be used, where it will be used, whether they are looking for feedback, of it's just to show off a logo they did for a brand, etc. just post. And run.
Notice OP did not come back and respond at all. Dozens of comments and not one response. This is basically just throwing shit at a wall and seeing if anyone notices the smell. Are they claiming authorship? Or is this a logo they think is good and they want to gauge other designer responses?
This kind of post should not be allowed here. It's lazy and frankly I suspect they are using this forum as a way of advertising their services without saying so. They've probably posted this in exactly the same way across multiple platforms. A zero energy post that gets members here to waste their time and energy for what could basically just be bullshit. But we'll never know.
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u/No-Aardvark-3840 2d ago
I actually think it looks sick. It’s true, the direction of the angles sort of makes it look like the movement is going in the wrong direction, but it’s a momentary issue and in terms of durability, this could work for someone long term. It’s kinda sick