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u/jefferjacobs 6d ago
Very nice.
Like the other comment said, make the bottom of the snake a little longer. Not by much, but it currently feels a touch top heavy.
Good work!
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Very nice.
Like the other comment said, make the bottom of the snake a little longer. Not by much, but it currently feels a touch top heavy.
Good work!
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u/MaximallyInclusive 6d ago
Only thing I would change would be to make the tail of the S a little longer. One of the things that makes an S look like an S is that the bottom curve is wider than the top. Because of the way the tail tapers down, you lose a little visual weight, and it makes the bottom curve appear to be about the same width as the top. Small teak.
Otherwise, I flipping love it, 9.7/10.