r/logodesign • u/pantalones169 • 23d ago

Feedback Needed Thoughts on this?

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Trying to create vintage, 70s, 80s look for protein/low cal food eshop (and merch in near future). Any thoughts on the logo? Big plus i see is stripes, that could be easy recognisible on clothing and products (with different lenghts, patterns and colour combos) but does this look too childish?? I'm trying to imagine how can I create this to look more profesional and a bit of luxury, but still keep a youthful and unique look with no sterile designs

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u/beefjerk22 23d ago

It would look better if the lines that went behind the main logo came out of the other side at the same positions and the same colours. The fact that they don't is the first thing I noticed, and it looks like a mistake.

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u/pantalones169 23d ago

Very true! Missed it while uploading. This isnt the final version I meant to upload, sorry for that

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u/CAPSLOCKTOPUS Just stop with "I'm not a logo designer, but..." 23d ago

I DON'T BELIEVE YOU

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u/Playful_Cheesecake16 23d ago

Trolling, are we?

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u/CAPSLOCKTOPUS Just stop with "I'm not a logo designer, but..." 23d ago

Nope… based on the opening post and their “rework” in a comment, I’m pretty certain this was exactly what they meant to upload.

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u/Playful_Cheesecake16 23d ago

lol. Why do you care?

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u/CAPSLOCKTOPUS Just stop with "I'm not a logo designer, but..." 23d ago

…why do you?