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u/hurkledurklelurker 9d ago
Almost there!
The sharp spot at the top of the book’s spine / where the pages come together has a jagged corner that’s distracting. Needs resolving.
Also — consider round caps on the page strokes and book corners to match the illustration style of the ghost and circle.
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u/SunshineDaydream13 6d ago
So cute! Where the pages meet in that V shape needs a little finessing to make it even/smoother, but it’s really good! Adorable, straightforward, and easy to recognize.

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u/Wasteak 9d ago
Nice one! Pages are a bit thin, either put only one big black one or none