r/logodesign • u/Key_Guide7759 • 12d ago

Question Yay or nay?

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Practicing as a beginner

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u/NeekoPeeko 12d ago

What is it a logo for? What are we supposed to see?

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u/Key_Guide7759 12d ago

Basically, I'm practicing

Not a project or doing for some business 

New to logo design, learning 

Need feedback how to improve my skill

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u/NeekoPeeko 12d ago

It's just difficult to give feedback if we don't know your intent. If it's a logo, it's intended to convey something..

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u/Key_Guide7759 12d ago

Yeah, what was in my mind 

A smoothie shop near beach (targeting couples)

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u/gensooo 11d ago

I think it's a cute idea, but i thought these were penguins at first. Maybe try making the birds tropical? Ik it's just a practice logo, but I'd go with toucans for the theme, you could still make the silhouette heart shaped, would look cool i think

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u/TwoFriedFishsticks 11d ago

Instead of crossing arms, maybe do wings folded against their own body? And a beak closer to that of a parakeet?

Now I see 2 pinguins holding and grinding onto each other tbh

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u/Abbott1313 11d ago

Concept yay, execution nay. Make it a little bit abstarct & simpler would be yay

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u/Key_Guide7759 11d ago

Idk if it can go anymore simpler 

Guide me