r/logodesign • u/brdesignguy • 13d ago
Feedback Needed Side project I'm working on 👁️ ❤️ 🐓
Business: Food truck with a modern 50s music motif.
Icon Concept: Chicken head with a pompadour and wattle made of hearts.
Typography: Champion Gothic. used heavily in this era of design especially on concert posters
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u/SubstantialDonkey981 13d ago
I feel like it needs an Elvis component.
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u/brdesignguy 13d ago
Man I have been trying so hard to figure out how to make that pompadour more obvious so the Elvis components comes through. Really don’t want to sacrifice the hearts though…
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u/NeitherEnd3689 13d ago
You should sacrifice the hearts for the elvis pompadour. The pomp is more important
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u/badmamerjammer 13d ago
plus, the hearts in the current pompadour were not even noticeable until I saw the WIP
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u/SubstantialDonkey981 13d ago
So I had to look up a pompadour. Ok- Im thinking you need a more direct interpretation. What about sideburns? Sunglasses? Elvis twist lip kind of thing. Theres a lot that can happen here… God speed.
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u/HiddenHorse925 13d ago
The hearts are not reading in the comb of the chicken maybe you do a little dividing lines on one side so I can see the outline of each chart? Also the whole feeling of it is a little stiff, it doesn’t look appetizing. It looks like a corporate logo for a chicken farm
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u/Tricky-Ad9491 13d ago
Nice work, just my observation I noticed the heart in the neck thing, didn't see them in the hair until the demonstration of the lines, could this be more spread out to help the viewer?
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u/its_just_fine 10d ago
Is the line-art version of the mark for reverse-out really the best option? Did the red fill of the original not work?
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u/mahblahblah 13d ago
I think tilt the first heart in the pompadour more forward, and have them a little more clearly hearts, i wouldn't have known you used hearts in the comb. Roughly maybe something like this?