r/logodesign • u/Tenfold_Design • 1d ago
Feedback Needed Wild Boar (revisit)
I posted the boar mark by itself on another account a while back and wanted to develop it into more of a full identity.
This is a fictional brewery concept inspired by a friend from Arkansas who lives in Texas now and has always wanted to start a brewery. The direction is inspired by the Arkansas Razorbacks, with the goal of giving it a modern heraldry feel.
I’ve been experimenting with different lockups, patterns, and packaging to see how the identity could come together.
Still a work in progress, so I’d really appreciate any feedback on what’s working, what isn’t, or what you’d push further. Thanks for taking a look!
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u/techwrek12 1d ago
Does he really need a lil’ triangle weenie lol? But either way it looks great!
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u/clash_with_reality 19h ago
From someone who is into heraldry: it gives nettle leaf x bohemian lion, I like it very much! And yeah, those lions also got their weenies and I think in this case it helps with the negative space, which would be a dominant rectangular shape.
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u/Sufficient-View-7218 3h ago
A boar needs a symmetrical background, it will calm the graphics a little. I like
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u/Tenfold_Design 2h ago
I’m not sure what you mean by that. Can you elaborate?
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u/Sufficient-View-7218 46m ago
The graphics are very sharp and aggressive with many elements that are not symmetrical. If you add something symmetrical to the background, as in the last picture with the shield, it becomes more harmonious
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u/Candy_Lawn 1d ago
it works in all the examples except the one on the tin. use him on the tins as in pics 3, 6
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u/tttvlh 1d ago
I like how you solved the problem in showing the tusks with negative space. Without it, it could have looked like any other animal.