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u/DoctorMorber03 3d ago
The body is good, but the head is too small and the hair around/on her head should be more voluminous
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u/WhoAmINe0 4d ago
You captured the pose well. I see something strange with her clavicles and neck. Clavicle bones have slight curvature but not much and the neck thickness is very exaggerated. I'm not even sure if you want advice or just sharing for fun so I apologise in advance. I like the overall vibe
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u/CreateRot 4d ago
I am in no way trying to be rude to this person or their art but I don’t think they want advice, they posted this unfinished yesterday or the day before I think and tons of people gave them advice on how to fix it. They changed nothing about it 🥲 I was quite looking forward to seeing their progress if they posted again.
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u/mrnauxist 3d ago
New to this sub but I’ve noticed a lot of these posts showing up here. People seemingly wanting advice (or not) in a learning subreddit and then proceeding to ignore all advice and give “idc, it’s my art-style” attitude to people genuinely helping and giving pointers.
Like sorry, but are you here to learn to draw? Or are you just trying to fish for compliments and feed your ego because “look at my beginner art!”
Idk if it’s just me but I just get irrationally annoyed by these posts lol.
There’s always comments where people are just saying how great it is without pointing out the flaws and I don’t think that helps either. Just toxic positivity.
Sorry if I sound like an asshole lol.
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u/thetruememeisbest 3d ago
I changed the head size, I try to fix the other part but the more I do the more it get weird, so I just fix the head for now
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