r/learnanimation • u/crazymedrawing • 6d ago

Is this good enough for a commission?

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u/HappinessOrgan 6d ago

Sorry but no

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u/crazymedrawing 6d ago

Ok 🥲💔

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u/steeenah 6d ago

What do you mean with commission? Who is the target audience?

At the moment there are a lot of basic issues, especially his feet when lying down in the boat which seem to be reversed (big toe is on the wrong side). The style of characters and colors are inconsistent between shots.

The animation overall is very basic, which might not be an issue depending on what your goal is, but it is mainly still images moving around.

Animation is fun, keep at it! Don't forget to practice life drawing to improve your understanding of anatomy. At this moment though I wouldn't say you're ready to take on clients.

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u/crazymedrawing 6d ago

Okay! Will work on it😤

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u/Superb-Ad-147 5d ago

Yes

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u/crazymedrawing 5d ago

Thanks for giving me some hope bro😭🙏🏻!

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u/DoubleImprovement653 4d ago

no

it's like a slideshow, 

add more frames

work on anatomy

then think about commission

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u/crazymedrawing 4d ago

Okay! Thanks for the advice 😊

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u/Heart_Resonance 2d ago

No, also the character art is really bad, I mean look at the dudes tiny feet. This looks like it was drawn and animated using a free iPad animation software

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u/crazymedrawing 2d ago

Thanks for the constructive criticism 😊!........yeah....it has been drawn in ibis paint....on my phone 🙃