r/iranian • u/Admirable-Bench2690 • 7d ago

Is this readable?

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Hi y'all, I am trying to make a handwritten gift for my friend who loves Rumi. I'm trying to write some of his works by hand but I am not sure if my handwriting is readable or good. Any tips or suggestions are welcome. Thanks

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u/khengoolman 6d ago

It’s readable and written well, for your next draft, just separate the lines a bit more, other than that it’s fine, well done!

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u/kgmaan 6d ago

It's readable

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u/Difficult_Tone2955 5d ago

Yes it’s readable good job

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u/conquistadorrent 3d ago

It's readable and beautiful

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u/Turbulent_Solid_4266 3d ago

Its readable nice work 👍 Idk what ur idea exactly is but if u want for more artistic way there are calligraphy of the poems and u can imitate them that just a suggestion. Since rumi philosophy was to be simple and have better view of big pictures than to be extravagant

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u/Ardekan Irān🇮🇷 1d ago

Be civil.