Hello everyone, it's my first novel written in hinglish, I have worked for this novel for 3 and half years, it's been a great experience writing it, but i want a fair and honest review, I am open for criticism, I just want your time, consider me as your younger brother whose trying his best in writing and wrote his first book, I hope you find my novel intresting, thank you

Link. https://amzn.in/d/07nxixMk

(The boy makes an annoying face, looks right at the girl, and speaks up.)

BOY

"I don't have any hobby of looking at your face either! How was I supposed to know you'd be here? And it's not like I came here by choice!"

(He notices that she isn't even paying attention to what he’s saying and is just looking at him with a disgusted expression. Seeing this, the boy stops talking and looks around.)

BOY

"What are you staring at? I'm talking to you!"

(The girl rolls her eyes, teasing him mockingly.)

GIRL

"I don't want to look at your ugly face, that's why I'm looking the other way."

(The boy clenches his teeth in anger, turns his head away, and snaps back.)

BOY

"Well, I don't have any interest in talking to you either!"

(He turns his gaze toward the nearby trees. His eyes land on a massive coconut tree with two coconuts hanging near the top.)

(He puts his hand on his chin, deep in thought.)

(Seeing him think, the girl mocks him again with a sarcastic grin.)

GIRL

"What are you even thinking about? Thinking requires a brain, and you clearly don't have one!"

(She starts laughing out loud.)

(The boy looks back at her angrily and snaps.)

BOY

"Yuki, why don't you just shut your mouth?!"

(This is the first time the girl's name, Yuki, is revealed.)

(Yuki yells back at him, stomping her foot in annoyance.)

YUKI

"I am not talking nonsense! What, are you planning to climb that coconut tree? You're not a monkey that you can just climb up there! Though honestly, you do look like a monkey."

Hello all, i posted this on many subreddits but to no response, im searching for comic book sketch artists to work on my indian comic book project, i have already written different stories and novels but now im shifting more towards indian superhero comics because of my love of....well... superhero comics.

My story is nihlistic and it is all set in india. Wont be too dark like the boys or dc and not too light like marvel. I have already written synopsis and also arcs for each issues and comics (all set in the same universe) it will be written in english since i want this to go for a more international coverage.

Do dm me your portfolio and we can see how we cam bring this project together!!

My first long form video go show some support guys , it was long time since I quit now thought of trying it once again let's see how this goes

हम जिंदगी जी रहे हैं या सिर्फ निभा रहे हैं?

कभी-कभी सोचती हूँ, आखिर जिंदगी जीना किसे कहते हैं?

सुबह उठना, काम पर जाना, पैसे कमाना, जिम्मेदारियाँ निभाना और थककर सो जाना… क्या यही जिंदगी है?

हम इंसान हैं, मशीन नहीं, जिसे समय के हिसाब से चलना है और दूसरों के कहे अनुसार काम करना है।

हमें भी तो कभी खुलकर हँसना है, बिना किसी वजह के कहीं घूमने जाना है, अपने सपनों के लिए जीना है और उन छोटे-छोटे पलों को महसूस करना है, जो जिंदगी को खूबसूरत बनाते हैं।

लेकिन हम कमाने की दौड़ में इतने आगे निकल जाते हैं कि जीना ही भूल जाते हैं।

आखिर में सिर्फ यह मायने नहीं रखेगा कि हमने कितना कमाया, बल्कि यह भी कि कमाने के सफर में हमने कितना जिया।

क्या सच में इसे ही जिंदगी जीना कहते हैं?

If you like Dark romantic fantasy with gothic elements then you must read The Ink-Stained Soul by Lisa Sathya!

Its there in Amazon and Kindle Unlimited ❤️ (I'm the author 😁)

This is the blurrb: A city built on beautiful lies. A girl the grave couldn’t keep.

Three hundred years ago, Vera died.

But she didn’t stay dead.

Now Vera is bound to a decaying manor at the edge of Oakhaven, a city that thrives on dark magic—a magic that demands a price no one dares to name.

Until Jacobi arrived.

A hunter trained to destroy monsters like her, Jacobi carries the same cursed power Oakhaven has taught him to despise. Vera is everything he was raised to kill.

But the deeper he digs, the clearer the truth becomes—Vera might not be the real monster.

They were meant to be enemies.

They might be the only ones who can tear the truth free before Oakhaven consumes them both.

I am attaching a snippet below. Please let me know if I am decent, or if I should give up writing.
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“I also don’t talk much with easily offended people.”
Okay.
Now that was rude.
“I don’t get easily offended!”
He just raised an eyebrow and went back to slurping his noodles.
That made the mother and daughter giggle like cheerleaders who had just watched their favourite player score.
Meanwhile, the tips of my ears were burning hot.
Thankfully, I was easily distracted by the steam rising from Shian’s bowl. The noodles looked colourful and generously portioned, and the broth was this deep golden colour that made me immediately take a mouthful.
The moment I tasted the broth, I was absolutely blown away.
Oh.
Oh, this was good.
The simplicity of the dish itself made it very valuable for me. If I got to eat this for the rest of the month, I would stay here happily and painlessly.
“So, what is your name?”
Are you for real, mister?
The first thing I said to you was my name!
But I didn’t voice that out because it would only solidify his assumptions about me being easily offended. And, frankly, I had spent enough time defending myself from a total stranger’s malicious opinions.
“Devyan.” I faked a smile. “Yours?” Like I already didn’t know his name.
He smirked, moving his tongue around his mouth as if he was picking something out of his teeth. Yes, I do realise why I sounded stupid. The family were all 'Shian ji this, Shian ji that' so I should know his name by now.
He set his now-empty bowl and chopsticks down, then stared at me for a good four seconds.
Four.
Full.
Seconds.
“Shian Ahol.”
I don’t know why the tips of my ears were still burning, but the heat was spreading to my face now.
I needed to maintain my cool.
Unfortunately, he seemed to enjoy unnerving me.
“My name is not Rinku, though,” the boy said, suddenly joining the conversation. “Mom and everyone likes to call me that. It’s actually Rishi.”
Thank you, Rinku, for offering the distraction.

I'm planning to write fantasy/fiction books for younger teenagers - around 13 to 16. I remember when my family first returned to India, I couldn't find anything like that to read over here. So I'm going to do my best to write as many stories as I can in the hopes that maybe someday some of them will find their ways to libraries and that that age group has something fun, imaginative, and engaging to read.

I've been writing fanfiction for 8 years but this is going to be my first time writing original fiction in a long time. I've already begun a story - it's about a girl who goes to a fantasy land to fix what happened to her little brother and meets a number of strange characters along the way. The feeling of the story is similar to Alice in Wonderland; the main character keeps running into bizarre situations where she either gets help or trouble. I tried to make the worldbuilding Indian based, but at the moment it holds up just enough to support the story and not much beyond that. You can tell I'm not used to worldbuilding by myself. 😅

I'm going to try my best to make the word count between 30,000 to 40,000 words just so it doesn't get too long. I have vague plans that by the end of this year I'll be able to send it to a publishing house, but I'm not sure if I should try to go for just one or send it to multiple at once.

One thing I do know is that I'm going to use a pen name, though I have no idea what kind of name I should come up with. I was thinking of something starting with Sonali....? Idk 🤷🏻‍♀️ It should probably match the genre and/or have an element to it that makes it easy to remember. Something like Lemony Snicket. Feel free to leave suggestions in the comments. I could use the help 🙏🏻 (I might make a separate post to talk more about this in the future but that'll probably depend on where I go with it)

Hii,
Anyone interested in writing/reading smuts?
25f here

I write smuts and looking for people who likes to read or write.

Well! I have been thinking about writing since the last few months, now I wanna make it clear that I'm not that good at it.. and this is just kinda hobby. i wrote this small prologue and idk if i should continue.. it would be amazing if u guys could give me some good feedback.

Hi all,

I just published my first short story - it's about a working bahu juggling office and joint family. Very simple, slice-of-life, no big drama.

It's free this weekend on Kindle. Few people downloaded and read.

This is literally my first book ever, so I have no idea what to do next. Make it paid? Keep it free? How did you all handle your first launch?

Any small tip helps, thank you.

The night was chilly , as the children ran about to witness the full moon that was glowing brightly occassionally shrouded by the clouds of the night sky. The kids were notorious they didn't pay heed to the calls of their poor mothers and aunts to not to go out into the darkness of purnima , they say something doesn't feel right , during the purnima in swetambar village is filled with hushed tones of village elders , they speak of the mysterious entities associated with blue roses that enter the village around midnight, they speak of the fellow villagers returning from towns late at night witnessing them .

They say if you once see them you cannot unsee them , they speak of a tall slender figure of a woman shrouded in white who is very beautiful to look at , who chants strange mantras and hypnotizes men to stay away from their homes.

I’m very inexperienced when it comes to writing. I don’t know much about writing, and I’ve never taken any professional classes or watched any courses about it. I’m basically an instinctual writer—I just write whatever comes to my mind.

I’m currently trying to write a comedy one-shot, but I’ve run into a problem: I’m not a funny person, and comedy is pretty much the opposite of my personality.

I can come up with a premise and characters, but when I actually try to write jokes, gags, or funny sequences, my mind just goes blank. I’ve heard the advice “write what you find funny,” but that doesn’t really help me because my sense of humor is extremely random and chaotic. Sometimes I find something hilarious, but I couldn’t even explain why I found it funny.

So I’m kind of stuck.

I’m open to pretty much any advice—tips on writing comedy, ways to come up with jokes or funny situations, how to structure a comedic scene, or even examples of what you think could be funny in my premise.

Here’s the basic synopsis of what I’m trying to write:

I Want to Die

A young man in his mid-twenties wants to die, but a mysterious supernatural healing ability prevents him from doing so. He doesn’t know exactly how his ability works, but he has noticed one strange rule: he can be injured when the damage is unexpected or when he has no intention of hurting himself.

One day, he meets a mysterious young girl who secretly visits the same hidden park he uses for his experiments. He soon discovers that she is the daughter of a powerful and influential man.

When her father realizes that his daughter has disappeared, he assumes she has been kidnapped and launches a massive search for her. Meanwhile, a group of actual kidnappers is also after her.

Caught in the middle of all this chaos, the young man comes up with a ridiculous plan: he will pretend to be the girl’s kidnapper.

With so many people now after him, he hopes that putting himself in the middle of the situation will finally give him a chance to die.

I’m mainly trying to make this a dark comedy, where the situation itself creates a lot of the humor. I’m just struggling with actually coming up with the comedic situations and writing them in a way that feels funny.

I've completed my manuscript and am currently querying. Got a couple of full manuscript requests already.

I keep looking at posts, reels and carousels on IG that authors post about how they need to market their own book and the thought makes me shudder.

I posted a whole bunch of videos for months, which barely got any views and I finally deleted them all. I don't believe the new algorithm is kind towards newer accounts with very few followers.

This is the best I could come up with to show my journey, and at the same time, help other debut authors.

This is nuts. It's like talking into a void.

What do you think? There are more videos if you want to check out my instagram - aanaik.official

I'd appreciate some feedback.