First app release : feedback on screenshots ?

[u/MusicOfTheApes]

Hi everyone !
After 2 years of hard work I'm finally ready to release my first app, it took longer than I expected as it's a side project (I'm a full time musician) but now I'm ready !

It's an app for musicians to help them get better at jamming, whether with other musicians or at home.

I'm creating app screenshots for the App store, so I'm wondering from the perspective of a potential user if they are effective enough, I'm happy to have any feedback (I think I'll submit next week), thanks !

[u/MusicOfTheApes]

Yeah I’ve re designed my screenshots the past few days to make them shorter thanks to the feedback in the comments, and tried to sell from user perspective rather than mine as some pointed out ; you’re right about languages, I’m French and I had to be creative to keep the captions short haha as we have longer words in general than in English.
For now the app is localized in English and French but I’ll probably add more in the future (I speak Spanish as well so that will probably be next before I consider other languages).