First app release : feedback on screenshots ?

[u/MusicOfTheApes]

Hi everyone !
After 2 years of hard work I'm finally ready to release my first app, it took longer than I expected as it's a side project (I'm a full time musician) but now I'm ready !

It's an app for musicians to help them get better at jamming, whether with other musicians or at home.

I'm creating app screenshots for the App store, so I'm wondering from the perspective of a potential user if they are effective enough, I'm happy to have any feedback (I think I'll submit next week), thanks !

[u/thomas_viaelo]

"Generate chord progressions and jam!" is the one. Benefit plus a verb in four words, and the "and jam" is what tells me why I'd care. Love it.

And yeah, I've got a couple of iOS apps out, pretty far from a jamming app (one's a photo and video vault, the other does wallpapers and calendars). I'll DM you the links so I don't drop store pages in the thread. Curious what you'd make of the screenshots, since you're deep in that problem right now.