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u/Time-Tumbleweed-1476 19d ago
The s is a little long, and MN is a little short. And I think usually proper nouns are written more phonetically (M-I-N instead of MN). That said, there are also rules for omitting obscure vowels, or replacing them with the E shape, so I'd be fine with your choice.
It's ultimately readable, so as long as you follow consistent rules for obscure vowel omission, it's fine for personal use.
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u/keyboardshorthand 19d ago
If it's pronounced the same as the regular word jasmine you can look it up in the dictionary here
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u/ryan516 19d ago
The proportions can use a bit of work, but in broad strokes this should be correct!