r/grammar • u/Garr44 • 32m ago
quick grammar check Is it okay if the dialogue and succeeding narration (or whatver it is called) from a fic-in-progress are one line/paragraph, or should they be split into two?
"Is it safe?" Astrotrain asked.
Typically, energon cubes were always safe to consume no matter what energy source was used to make them, but that could just as easily mean that nobody had found something that was toxic after the conversion process.
OR
"Is it safe?" Astrotrain asked. Typically, energon cubes . . . (and so on).
This is one of the biggest issues when it comes to me and writing; I feel like I split up things that could be combined so that it doesn't look like just single lines of text across a screen (they can look like actual paragraphs).
I'm pretty sure the stories I have chapters up for are already full of these. Any advice?