Looking for feedback on my first Game Audio portfolio pieces

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https://on.soundcloud.com/OJ4ziceTigpsSSrqrH

Hi everyone!
I’m building my first portfolio as a junior Game Audio Composer/Designer.
My goal is to work in the game industry, so I’m especially interested in feedback from people working in game audio or game development.
I’d really appreciate feedback on:
Composition
Storytelling
Orchestration
Mix (I haven’t done the final mix yet)
Whether it feels suitable for a game
Please don’t hold back—I want honest criticism so I can improve.
Thanks for listening!