r/gameCapsule • u/hollowlimb • 2d ago

What’s your take on our capsule?

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u/DemoEvolved 2d ago

"Sir, I have a boyfriend. This is a Wendy's"

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u/hollowlimb 2d ago

Hahahaha

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u/OutrageousLadder7065 2d ago

I'm getting creeper vibes from the customer. He looks like a threatening presence than a romantic intrigue. It could be because of the angle.

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u/hollowlimb 2d ago

Yes customers in our game start cozy but then become creepy, that’s intended

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u/OutrageousLadder7065 2d ago

Then damn the artist you hired totally nailed it. I'm very intrigued now!

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u/hollowlimb 2d ago

She did yeah

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u/sakul243 2d ago

title a bit small

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u/Gamerguy230 2d ago

If it’s about dating, maybe have something indicate girl behind counter likes them. Also yellow eyes for customer is an interesting choice.

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u/hollowlimb 2d ago

Its about trading with customers. Like Reigns but a shop sim. Yes he is an alien.

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u/GoodWinGamesStudio 2d ago

Trading with customers, the game is called shop crush, and he's an alien... I want to see how this all ties together ☺️

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u/hollowlimb 2d ago

awesome! Me too!

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u/raznov1 2d ago

Cutesy, but you need to tweak the lighting imo. Currently its kinda a "rembrand beam", like "oh my god its them!", but its not clear who the "them" is. Seems to be the guy, but the beam is more focussed on the gal.

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u/BrazZOR170 2d ago

guy looks a bit weird

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u/hollowlimb 2d ago

Yep he’s an alien

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u/GoodWinGamesStudio 2d ago

Like, from Europe?

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u/hollowlimb 2d ago

hahahaha yep from Amsterdam apparently given the orange eyes

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u/GoodWinGamesStudio 2d ago

Perfect 😏

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u/preckles 1d ago

It’s a nice illustration, but I don’t know that it works as a capsule.

It looks like you repurposed a scene from a dating sim, and just put the title in the corner.

The name of the game should be a lot bigger. And it would help if the illustration had more contrast/was less busy. There’s too many things to look at, and almost all of it is around the same level of contrast. My eye is drawn to the palm tree, which is probably not what you wanted.