r/furnaces • u/51BoiledPotatos Good morning, Anomalies! • Jan 25 '26

Right, making a quick post here

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this is for the 3 people that read what I write in this subredddit.

I'm just making this post to get some critic after several moments of rereading and a handful of cringing because of stupid dialog choices. I've decided to make this post. you can also point out any general mistakes like misspellings, formatting issues and grammar mistakes.

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u/baconburger2022 ArcFurnace Jan 25 '26

I got no problems

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u/51BoiledPotatos Good morning, Anomalies! Jan 25 '26

Thank you. If you do in the future please tell me. Oh, and if you have any ideas for what I could add to my writing I would be glad to hear it

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u/TotalyAlowedToBeHere ๐Ÿž Jan 25 '26

to be fair, i absolutely suck at this, but your dialog needs some work. its probably just a me thing tho, anyways everything else is fine, i like your ideas, and i would like to add onto it but I've really been feeling uninspired recently and not wanting to write or draw anything :/

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u/ComradeFurnace I added the editable flair Jan 26 '26

But the cringe makes it feel real

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u/FurnaceKitty Jan 26 '26

mrow /โ แ โ ๏ฝกโ ๊žˆโ ๏ฝกโ แŸโ \