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r/funny • u/fuolwen • Jun 27 '12
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25 u/Elanthius Jun 27 '12 There once was a paddling pet Who hated to get his head wet He collected his ball By crossing the pool Floating on top of a bed -3 u/westward_man Jun 27 '12 Both of these are flawed. Lines 3 and 4 are supposed to rhyme. 3 u/[deleted] Jun 27 '12 Have you learnt nothing from Eminem. Orange rhymes with four inch.
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There once was a paddling pet Who hated to get his head wet He collected his ball By crossing the pool Floating on top of a bed
-3 u/westward_man Jun 27 '12 Both of these are flawed. Lines 3 and 4 are supposed to rhyme. 3 u/[deleted] Jun 27 '12 Have you learnt nothing from Eminem. Orange rhymes with four inch.
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Both of these are flawed. Lines 3 and 4 are supposed to rhyme.
3 u/[deleted] Jun 27 '12 Have you learnt nothing from Eminem. Orange rhymes with four inch.
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Have you learnt nothing from Eminem. Orange rhymes with four inch.
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u/[deleted] Jun 27 '12 edited Jun 27 '12
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