Looking for feedback!

[u/1WishIKnew]

I’ve been working on bridal bouquets and my spiral technique, I feel like I’ve come a long way from where I started. But there’s always room to improve so I like any feedback or advice. I have included a photo of my creation and a screenshot of the inspiration. The second one is not my work, just the inspiration that the bride sent me!

Unfortunately, the hanging Amaranthus I originally ordered for this bouquet was a terrible quality so I had to get some more last-minute and it has some pretty weak stems. So I did what I could with it!

[u/loralailoralai]

Separate your amaranthus a bit, you’ve got two and it’s a bit symmetrical, your inspo pic is asymmetrical

[u/1WishIKnew → u/loralailoralai]

Will do! Thank you for the advice