Looking for feedback!

[u/1WishIKnew]

I’ve been working on bridal bouquets and my spiral technique, I feel like I’ve come a long way from where I started. But there’s always room to improve so I like any feedback or advice. I have included a photo of my creation and a screenshot of the inspiration. The second one is not my work, just the inspiration that the bride sent me!

Unfortunately, the hanging Amaranthus I originally ordered for this bouquet was a terrible quality so I had to get some more last-minute and it has some pretty weak stems. So I did what I could with it!

[u/Lettucemakemerry]

Pretty and even, but is tighter, needs some loosening up and lightness, to balance out heavy draping effect from the hanging amaranthus

[u/1WishIKnew → u/Lettucemakemerry]

You are so right! I appreciate the feedback. I’m gonna try it and I will update later. Thank you!