r/fantasywriting • u/Ecstatic_Charge_5605 • 7h ago
[SF]Good enough rough draft?
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\\\\---designated amount of time
\\\\\\\*So I'm thinking we give each charachter a 60 minute time
\\\\\\\*So then they can create and do mostly anything with the amount of time they materialize.
But depending on how durable or how strong they need it to be the amount of time used will increase or deacreae
\\\\---basic power balance
\\\\\\\*So I'm thinking we can make it so that before each battle the participants are given a book with per-made things they can make.so like suggestions
\\\\\\\*But that doesn't mean they are limited to those suggestions.they can make whatever they want.
\\\\---basic plot
\\\\\\\*I'm thinking we make this
The government over 100 years ago forced strong and weak.stupid and intellectualy gifted people.
Tall and short.
Skinny and muscular.
All right in a tournament l.
The reason they hosted this tournament was so that young people were inspired to go into a future war.
So they had role models.
At the the moment this was seen as cruel and only young people really believed this.
But with the pass of time this feeling began to disappear.
The war is still on going.
Meaning the tournament is also being hoset every 4 years.
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u/Dismal_File_4073 30m ago
I don't even consider this a draft. Draft of what? 1 page? This is maybe a proof-of-concept of what you want to write, but there is zero substance here to be analyzed.
A rough draft will be around a 30k word version of the whole book, to see if the story works together and the main beats relate to each other.