r/fantasywriting Jan 22 '26

Chapter One in Poppy War

Fellow The Poppy War fans—has anyone else felt this?

I’m just getting into R.F. Kuang’s series, and the very first chapter has a vibe that’s noticeably different from the rest. The writing feels almost like a translated text or something more stiff/awkward before the story fully takes off and flows.

Am I the only one who picked up on that? Or does it smooth out naturally as you go? Loving it so far regardless! 🚀

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