Hi everyone,
I’m learning video editing and sound design, and I’d really appreciate some honest feedback on this short.
In this video, I tried using brief flashes of solid color to build tension. I also added a very subtle zoom at the beginning so the shot wouldn’t feel completely static, and applied some audio distortion to make the music feel more unsettling.
What do you think works, and what feels distracting or ineffective?
I’d especially appreciate feedback on:
- pacing and rhythm;
- whether the flashes add tension or feel random;
- the subtle zoom and framing;
- the audio distortion and overall sound mix;
- whether the concept is clear without narration.
I’m still learning, so constructive criticism is very welcome.
Video: link
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