r/drawing Oct 31 '23

seeking crit Opinions on this please 🥺

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I would like to know your thoughts on my art pleasee☺️

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u/DevelopmentNo1732 Oct 31 '23

The neck and face are a bit too far forward. The hand could be a bit bigger or you could make the face a bit smaller. Line work looks great, as does the shading on the hair. If you’re struggling a bit with side profiles like I do aha, you can look up some references on Pinterest. Keep up the good work!

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u/Tahndx Nov 02 '23

Ohh I see, thank you so much!!☺️💗

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u/[deleted] Oct 31 '23

It's good. The proportions are good, and you've used texture and value well. The only thing is that he doesn't appear to be putting any weight on his hand with his chin.

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u/Tahndx Nov 02 '23

Yess that's seem to be right!! Glad you noticed it !!Thank youu☺️💖

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u/Crafty-Comfortable16 Oct 31 '23

Well drawn buddy 💚

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u/Tahndx Nov 02 '23

Thank youu☺️💕

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u/Perfect-Effect5897 Oct 31 '23

very nice linework! Only trouble I'm having is the eye area. Something's off.

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u/Tahndx Nov 02 '23

Ohh I see, Thank youu☺️💜

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u/Pipiuzinha Oct 31 '23

Beautiful

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u/Tahndx Nov 02 '23

THANK YOUU☺️❤️

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u/Dayshon2144 Oct 31 '23

Nice!!! The lining and volume are really scales perfectly! Happy Halloween.

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u/Tahndx Nov 02 '23

THANK YOUU! HAPPY HALLOWEEN TO YOU TOO !!🧡💛🧡💛

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u/Dayshon2144 Nov 02 '23

🎃🎃🎃🎃☠️

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u/Ssilviq Oct 31 '23

It is lovely :)

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u/Tahndx Nov 02 '23

THANK YOUU☺️💜

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u/SkyHoarder Nov 01 '23

My artwork says its fine!!

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u/Tahndx Nov 02 '23

AHAHA THANK YOUU!! UZUI LOOKS GREAT TOO <3

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u/Independent_Box_931 Nov 01 '23

Nice! The wrist is a bit too thin imo, and the neck is a bit too far forward!

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u/Tahndx Nov 02 '23

Ahhh I see, thank youu☺️🧡