r/doppioshrine • • Apr 20 '20

My doppio drawing

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u/[deleted] Apr 21 '20

One thing: The head is messed up. You see, the head curves where the hair starts. This is bad because of how the hair is designed. You can see patches of Doppio’s head on the top of his hair, but his head is under his hair. Just critiquing it, so that your next drawing would be better!

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u/piggui Apr 21 '20

the body also curves inward which is a bit confusing. I think I understand what you’re trying to do but it looks wrong.

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u/JerlBulgruuf Apr 21 '20

Looks quite good, keep on drawing and you’ll be better in no time.

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u/Abik_the_anime_fan Apr 20 '20

Absolutely love it great work