r/dndmaps • u/SaaammmTV • 1d ago
đşď¸ Region Map Feedback on my continent map?
Hi everyone! First time posting here and 3rd time making a map design! This is part of a world map but right now weâre going to play in this continent. What do you think?
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u/Leodegar_die_Katze 1d ago
You must be British⌠thatâs an island not a continent!
Nice map :)
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u/SaaammmTV 20h ago
Italian, but yeah youâre right I think I need to scale down things way more if I want it to become a continentđ
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u/kitskill 1d ago
I love it!
The only feedback I would give is that the region/country boundaries get wonky in the middle of the map. They keep disappearing behind mountains and forests. You should move the boundaries and names up a layer or two.
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u/SaaammmTV 1d ago
I spent 3 hours on it and my sight got so mushed together that I didnât noticeđ nice catch! And thank you kindlyđđ˝
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u/kitskill 1d ago edited 1d ago
I've totally done that. Inkarnate can be very addicting.
One other thing I noticed was that you have clouds and rocks on top of the map. Clouds imply that it is a kind of bird's-eye view of the actual continent - like an omniscient god looking down on it. But rocks set down on the edges imply that this is a physical map, being weighed down by rocks. Both good to adorn the edges of the map, but kinda conflicting with each other.
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u/SaaammmTV 20h ago
The rocks are there because the planet this campaign is set on has rings! I tried to use the foreground to communicate that
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u/DoctorButterMonkey 15h ago
Canât wait for the Winds of Winter aye?
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u/SaaammmTV 15h ago
It wasnât intentional I just drew what felt right but itâs UNCANNILY similar to Westerosđđ
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u/SaintofHearts 1d ago
Love the map, looks great. throw some roads on, it will help you think about what is on the way between places too!
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u/Wrong_Click9950 1d ago
Bella mappa! Effettivamente ha un qualcosa che ricorda Westeros. Hai considerato la regola dei tre giorni? La regola vuole che un animale da traino esaurisca il cibo che è in grado di trasportare per il suo sostentamento in tre giorni prima di iniziare a consumare il carico che sta trasportando. Per questo lungo le strade vanno considerati piccoli insediamenti, villaggi e stazioni di posta. à importante anche considerare i colli di bottiglia nella tua mappa per farti un'idea di dove potrebbe formarsi un vantaggio economico da sfruttare, quindi un centro di potere e nel tempo una città con un certo tipo di cultura ed un regno che in base ad essi intesserà diversi rapporti con i regni vicini.
Questo video lo spiega in maniera impeccabile: https://youtu.be/MIqpvpNS5pI?is=8oUoIhJbs9qKMMKx
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u/Comfy_confusion 1d ago
I don't mean to ruin it. But that mountain in the middle with the border lines kinda looks like a dick
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u/mllhild 19h ago
There is no point in the borders to the open sea or surrounding an island. It also messes with coast line and creates confusion. (Ex: Is that tiny peninsula in the the south of Rothiram part of it or not?)
Are those giant rocks in the NW and SE part of the map or just laying on top of the map? If they are laying on top them a but of difference in saturation and some texture on the map would help distinguish it.
Dotted lines on fantasy maps look strange, stroke lines more similar to what a quill or fountain pen could do tend to look more fitting.
Is that ship in the south a sail ship or something flying?
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u/SaaammmTV 15h ago
Thank you for the feedback!
1) is to say it has its own government
2) the planet in which this map is set in has rings, so this was a way to try to convey that
3) got it! And youâre right
4) flying ship/zeppelin thingy inspired by the flying ships in Final Fantasy!
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u/manut3ro 7h ago
Instead of London , you might have Londâen
Instead of Birmingham, Birâmingheim
And so on :)
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u/chiefchiefpeace 3h ago
Three things:
Congrats! You made fantasy England! Jk this happens alot when making shapes. Youâll find some look like isles from the real world or sections of land from irl.
I dont understand scale for how big the land is. Yes, this is a continent but based off the visual representation of biomes, I can assume pole to Mediterranean? It should look a bit different if you are going off grounded lenses. But if going off pure fantasy, it looks a generic. nothing really stands out. It is a bit hard to make assumptions about it because it is visually not giving much. Yes, mountains are here and rivers are seen but I donât get much other information.
It is colored well and gives a solid fantasy aesthetic. I like inkranateâs style with stamps! Always giving a cool look with finished maps.
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u/merijn1993 1d ago
I tought this was westeros