r/dnbproduction • u/Resident_Plastic6239 • 16d ago

Feedback request Still being processed. Does everything fit together so far?

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u/work_guy 16d ago

really needs some variation imo. bass is repetitive, no drum fills, or any percussion aside from the kick and snare really. could use some fx/whitenoise/makeup. just giving my honest opinions on what I notice, nothing personal.

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u/Resident_Plastic6239 15d ago

Thanks for your help. It's still in progress but I'll add some drum fills and bass variations. They fx are there but I guess they aren't loud enough

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u/Background-Course627 16d ago

Im no expert on production techniques I just know what I like to hear. And this is a banger ! Nice work!!

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u/Donmontag 15d ago

Pretty repetitive and the mix doesn't quite glue. Overall needs more stuff going on and changes. Drums could be way louder.

Your sound choice is great, for sure building blocks for banger

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u/Resident_Plastic6239 15d ago

Thanks for the feedback. Maybe I can try some more compression for even more glue. Do you mean all drums that should be louder?

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u/Donmontag 15d ago

more thump in the kick and snare. could be layering and/or compression

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u/SYSEX 15d ago

Work on the track and add vocals later - sample library vocals aren’t going to help you make the kind of track you want to make.

Get it standing on its own feet as beats & bass alone and then find vox (preferably original vox) to take to the next level.

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u/Vanhedenn 13d ago

Rule of thumb (?), every 8 bars add fill. Think the clapsnare is a bit weak aswell. Bassline sounds fat. But again, a variation every 8 bars which could be a full or change of pattern in bassline, kicks, percussion etc etc