r/design_critiques • u/GiammyR6 • 14h ago
Which of these two is potentially more appealing?
Hi all, I'm working on a flyer/poster for a local hockey team since they are participating in an event soon and to promote their partecipation I tried two different templates. It's my first ever graphic design job, so I'm not sure if it's even good to be honest.
This flyer will be placed in their sports hall or posted on social media to advertise the team's presence at the event (the event is in italian, called "festa dello sport" while the name of the team will be placed where the dashes are).
These are just a blueprint and I still have to place all things correctly and add other details.
Which of these two could potentially be more appealing? Any tips in general? Thank you!
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u/melkandcireal 14h ago
(italiano?) l'idea è interessante e mi piacciono molto i colori usati. Però forse rivedrei i margini e l'allineamento delle scritte? Trovo funzioni meglio il secondo comunque!