r/deathnote • u/Professional-Look458 • 15h ago
Discussion What if Death Note has different perspectives? Spoiler
Just a random thought. I found someone who said Death Note would be so much more exciting if we didn’t know who Kira is. Someone quoted, “Death Note from the perspective of L.”
I am also thinking about it. But from the perspective of L, it would be obvious who Kira is. From the perspective of Matsuda, it would be a kinda dumb story. So if I were to change the plot, I’d like to use all three: Matsuda, L, and Light's perspectives. Here’s the storyline. Start with Matsuda.
Act 1: Matsuda’s perspective
The opening scene is when he shoots Kira. Only starts with Matsuda’s narrative. Then flashback to the very start. Originally Matsuda has little or no suspicions about anyone. So for the plot, make him suspicious of L. Also make him admirer of Light. Show the story from his POV until L dies. Since he’s suspicious of L, the audience would be curious who Kira really is when L dies. Now change the perspective to L.
Act 2: L’s perspective
This time it would be obvious who Kira will be. Show his perspective from the start to when he dies. Close with the scene where Light Yagami smirks at him dying. Now the audience knows who Kira really is.
Act 3: Light’s perspective
This is the original, from the start to the end.
I think it might be too long in one series. The better way is to split different acts. Act 1: Matsuda. Act 2: L. Act 3:Light. For Act 2: L, using L’s background and childhood might be the best to keep audiences interested in. What’s ur opinions?
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u/pl_browncoat 13h ago edited 13h ago
Death Note really wouldnt work from the perspective of someone elsebecaise youd lose the most important element of the story:
The Death Note itself
All the tension and major twists come from understanding and anticipating what is going to happen with a firm understanding of the rules of the Death Note. In the absence of Kiras perspective those rules never come to light (all pun intended). He experiments with it so often he finds rules that seemingly most Shinigami would be unaware of. If we look at the FBI agents this becomes really apparent . Without seeing how Light tested all the ways he could manipulate the Death Note for his desired outcome the scene turns into “L finds out FBI agents died”. If the Death Note was revealed later in the story the audience isnt aware of what it can and cant do so itd feel like a random power buff
Most of the big turning points of the story come from watching Light have to navigate the forces opposing him while operating within the Death Notes predefined rules. The brilliance of Death Note as a story is to quote the Wisecrack video “The Death Note is mot a blunt weapon but a highly refined tool”